Monday, October 27, 2014
Free the children my first club
My first club was free the children. It was held in Mr.Pocock's room whitch is room 114.You can go see this club at lunch on any thursday.For me it was really scary why? Because i am new to the school and it was my first club.In this club the give away t-shirts to get the message around the world.The reason they do this club is to support children.This club helps children grow up,eat healthy and have a reasonable life.This club is suppost to be for people who enjoy working with others and even for people who are kind enough to help run chareties.We all should support this club because its for a good cause.
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I really like how you appreciate what the club does and how you explained the club itself. There were some spelling mistakes and punctuation errors but overall, the content was great.
ReplyDeleteDylan,
ReplyDeleteYou explained what the club was about very well, and included a great description of the club. If there was one thing that maybe you could have done, it would be to have included more of your personal opinion of the club, and how your experience was. Needless to say, you did an excellent job on your post. You fully understood the purpose and aspirations of the 'Free the Children Club', and that ability to understand things, no matter what they are, will help you down the road.